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Our little secret by creanima Our little secret by creanima
EDIT: SOOO many views and comments in just 3 days ;///-///; Thank you so much! I'm so happy for so much positive feedback! TuT /EDIT

Tigerclaw and Ravenpaw :3
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I'm quite happy with the result! I can even say it's one of my best digital work ever. I love detail -
My hand's just dead right now :'D

Scene: Ravenpaw just took a piece of prey from the fresh-kill pile, sat down near the bramble wall of ThunderClan camp and wanted to take the first bite when Tigerclaw, his mentor came over, remembering him about the secret Ravenpaw keeps. Tigerclaws gury gaze speaks volumes: one word, my apprentice, and you're as dead as the mouse here... Ah and.. have a nice day ^_~"

Yep xD

I know the background doesn't match very nice but I at least tried D//:
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:iconmag015:
I will take a little time to write you something. First, the biggest point is the way you draw show how Ravenpaw is trapped - poor mouse è.é she doesn't deserve this - and how his mentor is - crazy - dangerous.
Then, I really like how you draw it, particulary the BG, you must have one dead hand. D8
It's surrely one of the best warriors fanart I have seen. Not a huge impact, but a very original interpretation.
But, I think that you have an awesome talent, especially for the BG - yes, again him, but it's not my fault, he is to pretty - and for the cats expressions.
So, in hope that I helped you. ♥
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When I first saw the thumbnail for this, I had to click on it. The "dark-ness" surrounding the duo truly blasts off that devilish, shadowy atmosphere and definitely reminds me of Tigerstar & his cruel personality, a bit dark but I could definitely make out the depiction. The background has been mastered well; indeed adds to that sense of "wilderness". You've managed to capture both their expressions in this scene greatly; I enjoy your taste for details, especially on Tigerstar's muzzle/head. My only concern is Tigerstar's "slanted" head? Perhaps practising anatomy a little more, other than that this is simply brilliant!
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oPoltergeist Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2015  New member Student Digital Artist
This is a very detailed work of art indeed. The textures, background, and fore-colors are brilliant! The shading is very nice as well. I do like how you blended/smudged the pelt markings and the description of the twigs in the back. Good job!
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:iconverinawolf78:
Verinawolf78 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015
This is so good  keep it up
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:icontopnotch0060:
topnotch0060 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2014
Raven paw is always being bullied by Tigerclaw/star. 
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:icongalewings:
galewings Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Truly amazing~! ; w ;
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:iconmistpaw89:
Mistpaw89 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014  Student Artist
.. crying and screaming and wailing .. POOR RAVENPAW!!!
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:iconwskylar:
wSkylar Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
One second...just one second i thinked that has Scourge...
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:iconsilverclover188:
SilverClover188 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING
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:iconclaerity:
Claerity Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014
Featured here: fav.me/d7x4949 :)
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:iconokamijin:
OkamiJin Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014
( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
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:iconcoilheart:
CoilHeart Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
2 years later and I still love this XD
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:iconxask--firestarx:
xAsk--Firestarx Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014
This is so like the book. It shows how RavenPaw feels trapped under TigerClaw's grasp. Poor RavenPaw I always hated TigerClaw because of this. (Spoiler) The only reason I like Scourge is because he defeated TigerClaw. Anyway You do great art and you have such great artistic skills! :)
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:icongirlwithflowerinhair:
amazing expresions
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:iconmewkazuka:
MewKazuka Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I haven't finished the first book, but Tigerclaw killed Redtail right? That's the secret isn't it.
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:iconocelotpup7:
Ocelotpup7 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh my holy crap!!! Those stripes are gorgeous =D
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:iconruggedcatcast:
RuggedCatCast Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Student General Artist
Ravenpaw's 'oh shit, he saw me' moment. 
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:iconxxgoldenspiritxx:
XxGoldenSpiritxX Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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:icontigerette7272:
tigerette7272 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Student Artist
Awesome pic!!
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:iconmalas13:
malas13 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice!
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:iconcatsarecool102:
Catsarecool102 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
i love ravenpaw
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:iconfirelight342:
firelight342 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013
I love how you drew Tigerclaw/star 
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:iconcrimson-wolf2323:
Crimson-Wolf2323 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
poor ravenpaw 
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:icondawnheartshadowclan:
DawnheartShadowClan Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Student Writer
They could have used Ravenpaw so many ways, the Erins had SO many ways to develop Ravenpaw's story and bring more drama, but no, they chose to keep him with Barley.
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:iconelement-oracle:
Element-Oracle Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The title is based off of that scene from the Lion King, right?
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:iconcreanima:
creanima Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is just the first sentence that popped into my mind while thinking about a title for DA ^^ ya I know that scene from lion king of course c:
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:iconelement-oracle:
Element-Oracle Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^_^ The Lion King is my favorite movie :D
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Shadowlightstar Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013
Awsome...???paw with Tigerclaw (Ravenpaw?)
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:iconxxaskragexx:
XxAskRagexX Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist
what program do you use
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:iconcreanima:
creanima Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
adobe photoshop elements 8.0
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XxAskRagexX Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist
ok

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animechick344034 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013
POOR RAVENPAW. Love the sinister look you gave Tigerstar
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:iconcreanima:
creanima Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
aw thank you x3
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:iconwatching-the-sunset:
Watching-The-Sunset Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Your picture makes me wanna snuggle-hug tigerclaw/star (<---------SPOILER)
Hes so fluffy! :D
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JadeXBlackFang Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
poor ravenpaw he had to go trough so much! and then bluestar not recovering!!! i hate tigerclaw !!!!!its all his fould BlueStar didnt recover!
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:iconcreanima:
creanima Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aw yeah I agree, poor Ravenpaw :'3 We share an opinion huh?! >//<
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:iconjadexblackfang:
JadeXBlackFang Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
xD yup
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Maddimrw420 Featured By Owner May 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this is awesome! I love the style of them XD
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:iconeeveestarluver:
Eeveestarluver Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
'Cause two can keep a secret if ONE, of them is DEAD.
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:icondragonheartedgirl:
DragonHeartedGirl Featured By Owner May 17, 2013
You really caught Tigerclaw in this one:) so epic:D
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:iconcreanima:
creanima Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you! ;u;
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:iconskyclan199:
skyclan199 Featured By Owner May 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Bug off, Tigerclaw! Leave Ravenpaw alone!
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:iconderpywolf44:
DerpyWolf44 Featured By Owner May 4, 2013   Digital Artist
reminds me of scar and simba
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:iconsparklyren:
SparklyRen Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Student Artist
So cute!
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Niji-Senpai Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Lol this fooled me I thought it was tigerpaw and Scourge when he beats him up hehe, but I like it anyways ^^
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Serbear00 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013
Awesome!
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:iconivyheart13:
IvyHeart13 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Hats of to you on this one!
You captured the body language, eyes, and face expressions perfectly!
:+fav:
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:iconcreanima:
creanima Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you!! ;u;
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:iconivyheart13:
IvyHeart13 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
welcome ^^
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:iconowlowwy:
Owlowwy Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is pretty good but I think you need to work on the twigs or brambles in the background.
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:iconcreanima:
creanima Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you ^^
Yep, I'm not good at backgrounds, but I try harder each time I draw one :3
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TheSlendermanIsHere Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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