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Pack, pack... Kill, kill... by creanima Pack, pack... Kill, kill... by creanima
"Pack, pack... Kill, kill..." the young injured she-cat muttered absently.
"Brightpaw! Come back to me!" Cloudtail begged worriedly, "You are still beautiful!!"

[no quote from the book]

This is my favorite Warrior Cats scene from all books I have read.

Hlysht this took me two weeks or something =_0
I really don't remember the accurate scene, this is just how it's etched in my mind. Artistic freedom! :dummy:

Warrior Cats "Brightpaw/Lostface" and "Cloudtail" by Erin Hunter, art by me.

~Owlflight29 wrote a little scene text for my drawing!

a little white and orange cat turned her head to face the speaker. Muttering a solemn whine. "pack pack, kill kill"
Cloudtail cringed and started to walk over to the she-cat. Trying to thing of the bright side, "it's going to be okay! i bet Swiftpaw is catching a squirrel now by Lionheart~"
"pack, pack, kill,kill" the she-cat continued in a ghostly way.
Cloudtail neared her ragged face covered in leaves and gasped. Leaving a shiver run down his spine. like it always did. "Brightpaw, come back to-"
"Pack, pack...Kill, kill"
"Brightpaw... Promise me you'll get better. And get back to hunting and fighting like the beautiful she-cat you are...."
For a second the she-cat seemed to feel a flicker of emotion. But it left and she went back to the same solemn words.
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Critique by Ask-Brakenfur Oct 5, 2012, 10:43:57 PM
this dawning is fantastic.i love the shading and the anatomy. it is really realistic it was really sad when brightheart lost on eye by the dogs. i almost cried i loved it when cloud tail said she was still beautiful. the background in the drawing in great. everything looks so real.this is probably this best artwork i have seen so far.i almost jumped out of my skin when i saw this. you must have practiced a lot to get this good. i like this so much that i am going to add you to my deviant watch and fave this.
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Soo beautiful ist my favororit scene too and ist the wrong place Lostface lies next to Wieselpfote (sorry for German) but its sooo awesome the shading the pose al is sooo ... I dont know i cant finde words to diskribe that. I like the Eyey she look wery lost in her thoughts . And the littel forest pice i see ist soo fantastic the light and this all ist... Amazing
ANd two weeks are so many work
the fur looks like real fur and did i say i love this shadding
hope you draw more fantastik sceens from Warrior cats

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Candy-Kitten-Paws Featured By Owner 4 days ago
wolvesforhope Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2015  Student Interface Designer
i think brightheart is still beautiful no matter what. 
Daisyleap Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2015
This is very beautiful, creanima! I love it! :) 
Dustyclaus123 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
cloudtail is so fluffy and small <3
SliverPaw101 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2014  Student Artist
nice ........ drawing....why did she get hurt!
jill1354 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2014  Student General Artist
so sad yet so strong and romantic it's amazing the book and this pictureClap 
thegamingscourge Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
>:( i will find the rest of those doge and KILL them.
Jayfeather1234567 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014
Can I make a request? 😊
Tinuviel-Twilight Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2014  Hobbyist
It's so beautiful. 'I love it' just doesn't convey my feeling. It's one of my favourite scenes - on par with several of the JayfeatherXHalf Moon ones and HollyleafXFallen Leaves
Lyra66 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014
The-Elvenqueen Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The atmosphere and emotion in this picture is incredible! :noes: and the expressions are perfect...the shading is so soft and fits so perfectly with the mood! :D
Glintfang Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
amazing detailed shading, and just great details overall :happybounce:
a tender scene ^^, though sad because Brightheart's not better yet :'(
renzoneru Featured By Owner May 6, 2014
Dusk-SilverHeart Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
you have the best artistic taste and the thing is you CAN draw it! it ok it you tell me what drawing system u use???? 
CelestialStream Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014
WOW. Just Wow. You are amazing. The drawing is too.
Dusk-SilverHeart Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
WOW what did you use to make
mintytea3 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
so beautiful 
Zoey888VGtech Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014
2 words: So fluffeh
warriorgirl33 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

di I look THAT bad? awww.... ur so sweet cloudtail!

thanks brightheart

do you take requests..? :3
lightcat2002 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
love this pic mixed fillings about cloud tails eye brow dots thou

Shadowlightstar Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013
Oh its Awsome...
KartalTheArtist Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww...they both look so soft
EmberTheRogue22 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013
Romeh96 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Do you do requests? :)
creanima Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nuu currently not sorry .u.
Romeh96 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:( If you start to, gimme a call please
creanima Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'll announce it by a journal entry then :3
Slendyman200 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I read the book this picture is based off a sad story
shadowdragondrawer Featured By Owner May 17, 2013
for some random reason.. i always imagined cloudtail's with a high pitched voice... like a chipmunk's. xD anyways, i really like this.. it is AWESOME!! :3 ALSO, haters who don't like your photos, I HATE THEM! >:O
AkatsukiAndBloodstar Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Why hate someone and use such a powerful word against someone because they don't have the same opinion? :/
creanima Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
aww thank you! ^u^
CarlottaStudios Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Student Writer
Woah! This picture is amazingly detailed! I like it very much.
Xin-tetsu Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Student Interface Designer
that's so beautiful and touching ;~; one of the strongest moments in The Warriors! great drawing <3
creanima Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
th-thank you ;u; reading this from you means a lot to me.
featherstarr Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
i love it
Talvikinkukka Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
Do you take Art Trades? This is really lovely!
creanima Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
currently I don't do AT's, sorry :'3
Talvikinkukka Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
okay, it's ok
Akinal78 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Artist
of what clan are they?
creanima Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
they're from thunderclan ^^
Akinal78 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student Artist
oki thanks!!! :squee:
Kendell9702 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012
Love it.
EMMA789 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
GildedFrame Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I love your style! Realistic yet the faces are given such heartbreaking expressions! Seriously, I adore this piece!
creanima Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you ^.^
1Skysoul1 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
:DDDDDDDDDDDDDD I luv brightheart!!!!!!!!! Poor kitteh...
Nesuki Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Boah Katze x//3//x Dieses Bild ist einfach sowas von UMWERFEND! x/////x
Ich glaub das ist eins deiner besten Arbeiten überhaupt. Ich kann das echt minutenlang angaffen und finde einfach jedes Mal aufs Neue etwas, was mich begeistert >//<
Und obwohl es schon nen knappen Monat unkommentiert in meiner Inbox rumchillt, hab ich es mir immer wieder angesehen x//D >//< Auch als ich in Holland war :dummy:
Habs auch Robba gezeigt :eyes: Der mag Katzen ja auch saugern >//< Und dem is die Kinnlade runtergeklappt :la: Der fand das auch total super ^///^ >u<
Du zeichnest einfach so uuunglaublich realistisch! Und du wirst einfach IMMER besser ey x//x *rumneid* x//DD >u<

Die Posen der beiden sind einwandfrei, ebenso die Perspektive zB bei Cloudtails Kopf oder Brightpaws Pfoten °///° Wie godlike du das hingedeigselt hast eh xux Ich hätte bei der Perspektive ihrer rechten Hinterpfote bestimmt voll den Anfall gekriegt x"D Ahww aber das sieht sooo tollig aus hier >///<
Die Mimiken sind echt mitreißend und rührend. Sehr emotionales Werk D//: Brightpaws Blick... Da krieg ich ne Gänsehaut .-. Ihr Blick ist richtig leer und kalt. Pure Hoffnungslosigkeit. Ich bewundere dich ganz ehrlich dafür, dass du das so umsetzen konntest .//u//.

Aber obwohl die beiden Katzis unglaublich gut gelungen sind gefällt mir besonders der HINTERGRUND!! X////X
ALTAH! ZEIG MIR WIE DAS GEEEEEHT!!!! *dich schüttel* DDDDD///X Ey guck dir mal allein schon die Blätter an auf denen Brightpaw liegt x////X das is SO unglaublich cool ;_;
Ich hab einfach so keine Geduld für solche Dinge... sieht man ja an meinem ollen Facehug Bild |"D Hmmmpf das Gestein... und VOR ALLEM der Wald im HG DD:
Boah deine HGs sind echt anbetungswürdig, weißt du das?? ;//;

Und WEHE du machst deine Skills noch einmal irgendwie runter Ò,ó x///D
creanima Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Bwaaaah *von der Megawelle Lob weggeschwämmt werd* wuschhhh 8D
Danke T////T Wuaaah nu darf ich nich mal meine Skills runtermachen? x'D Hufff...
...ich hab aber auch ne Weile an dem HG gebastelt bis er mir halbwegs gefiel u.U
Na dann!! Meine Gegenreaktion: Vielen Dank, und ich sag dir da ist noch Luft nach oben! :dummy:
Ich mag es echt gern etwas mir bekanntes zu zeichnen (z.b. thema katzen) und dann etwas neues einzubauen um was draus zu lernen x3
Robba mochte es auch? ;U; wie cool!
Wenn ich das nächste mal an einem HG sitze und du grad on bist, frag ich dich on du Lust hast per n bisschen reinzugucken wenn du magst c:
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