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The Power of Three by creanima The Power of Three by creanima
:iconlaravyplz:YAAAY this one is my Thank-You-For-300-Watchers-Pic!! :iconlaravyplz:

..and it is for all the people who watched me due to the Warriors stuff I do! I hope you like it!

From left to right: Lionblaze(m), Jayfeather(m), Hollyleaf(f)

I know the title isn't quite correct, but I wanted to name it like thiiiiis! xD (people who read the 3rd series will know what I mean)

Tried to consider their characteristics as good as I can o.o Lionblaze is strong and a little bulky (that's how I imagine him), Jayfeather is smart and skinny and Hollyleaf is plushy and sweet ^^
I know the poses are not very inventive °xD and the colours aren'r very realistic, but who cares, its Warrior Cats <.<°

...and... and I... drew a background!! D8
Yep.. a simple.. boring... forest.. background... well at least it was a little fun <.<°

First time I request critique x///x

< EDIT >: Thanks to Slipping-Star I now know that blind born cats don't have grey pupils... Jayfeather should have quite normal black pupils. Those grey pupils result from a disease called cataracts.</ EDIT >
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First of all, this is amazing because that's pretty much exactly how I picture all of them, so way to go there! now for the actual critiquing. I'm going to start with Lionblaze: the fur and anatomy are all astounding, so I;m just going to say that I love how you did the fur on his chest! It looks very much like fur! Secondly, the way you do your eyes!! It's amazing! Would you care to do a tutorial on that? Because for some reason I can never get the eyes to be that perfect. Now on to Jayfeather: the anatomy, colors, fur, everything is great. I love the way you did his tabby stripes - there subtle, but still noticable. Hollyleaf: I really like her nose for some reason...it's just so cool hahaha! The way you managed to do the shine on her eyes is fantastic! So all in all, you did a fantastic job making this picture, the picture is very clear and nice to look at, and the cats don't have any hair (I hate when people put hair on their cats, so thank you for not doing that!) and the depiction of the characters is very accurate! The only thing I would say is that they look quite young (like apprentices)...but perhaps you drew it that way on purpose? I have one parting question before I end this critique - Do you use a tablet or mouse pad?
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Wow. This artwork is fantastic!!! :D Jayfeather, in my opinion, is the best looking in this picture. I haven't yet found a Jayfeather who's eyes look so realistically blind. All the eyes, however look absolutely phenomenal. They look extremely realistic! great job! A few other things to look out for: on Jayfeather's and Hollyleaf's ears, i would watch out that you don't make the insides so big. The back needs to be somewhat visible. If this is confusing, look at how you drew Lionblaze's ears. You can see a little bit of the back of the ear showing. This makes the ear look more 3-dimensional. Lionblaze seems to have abnormally large shoulders. Maybe you were trying a "buff" or "older" look? I think if you wanted more of that style, i would go with adding more muscle. Also, be sure that you can identify a neck on the cat and it's not completely covered with fur. Speaking of fur, the patterns are beautiful and beautifully blended. you can make out the stripes and such but they are not excessively hard-lined (that just means that they are blended). I also like the expressions. Lionblaze still has the playful look i imagine him to have when he was a kit, Hollyleaf looks caring, but i think that Jayfeather's expression should be more..."knowing." I see him as being wiser than his siblings. But that's just me. You imagine however you want. If i critiqued any personal style that you created i'm very sorry. styled or not, this is one absolutely genius piece!!! :) I hope this helps :3
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Spinnentatze Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2015  New member Hobbyist Digital Artist
cute ❤
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SliverPaw101 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2014  Student Artist
1 thing Jayfeather eyes are not like that!
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TheScottishKitty Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Lionblaze and Hollyleaf are like 'Hey, how ya' doin'?', and Jayfeather's seems to... lack their enthusiasm... to say the least. Shows how sceptical Jayfeather is of literally every cat around him.
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AJWilliams1107 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That is REALLY COOL! Jayfeather is my favorite character and you drew him just how I imagined him!
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SFninja39ElsaRD Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014
Wow, they look great!  And their eyes!
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bellasara11233 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014
jayfeathers face though
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MoHowl Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome family portrait :)
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Moostawsome Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014
COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL:awesome: 
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WinterHuntress Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love your drawings! They are magnifique! This is me trying to do art on a computer (the equivalence anyway) artist's block 
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SugarrCane Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013
Favourite warrior cats fanart so far
Great job
Love the expressions!
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Nychata Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh gosh Jayfeather looks kinda creepy O.O
But really nice pic! I really do like it. (ouch, was this correct grammer?)
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LunarKittyx Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013
:iconrudelazeplz:
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Firestar-Graystripe Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
Sweet!
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StormHollie Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Student Filmographer
That face Jayfeather has, I bet he's like "What are staring at?"
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Nebelsee Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
really cool i love hollyleaf the bestXD
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creanima Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you <3 ^.^
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kongohb Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Student Digital Artist
jayfeather: what are we looking at
lionblaze: just smile
hollyleaf: im only smiling cause im inclued in this pic
lionblaze: shut up
jayfeather: i wont smile
lionblaze: you both suck....

AWESOME PICTURE !
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creanima Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LOL your dialogue xDD

thank you .u.
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animechick344034 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
lol Jay looks like e.t
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:iconcreanima:
creanima Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks!
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animechick344034 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013
POWERS OF THREE
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KillingNightMare01 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013
Wait, help here. In my land, there dosn't exsist the book where those three are, so, is Jayfeather(?) blind?
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creanima Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Jep he's blind :3 but his eyes actually got black pupils, because his eyes don't have a desease, he was just born blind, so his eyes shall look normal. I did it wrong here. anyway xD he's blind x3
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KillingNightMare01 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013
Owe, well, I think he looks great! I <3 your art!
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:iconcreanima:
creanima Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
aghh ;A; thank you <3
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Echofur00 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AHHH I love Hollyleaf's eyes >w<
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creanima Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you c':
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Echofur00 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your welcome! <3
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Weaselhatter Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, ^^ the guy in the middles expression.
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WolfPrint267 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
This is an amazing pic!!!!
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LilacMouse Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awe... So cute! I love the way how Jay kinda looks confused
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creanima Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha thank you :D
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Rei-Kibou Featured By Owner May 2, 2013
I so love the look on Jayfeather's face ^^
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DestinyNoel Featured By Owner May 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I luv it :D The detail give power to it,and I love your style & how realistic ^^ The only thing that's incorrect about it is Jayfeather's eye are actually clear =p But other than its AMAZING <3
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creanima Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah you're right ^^ The eyes are only grey when cats have that one desease called cataracts I think :3
Thank youuu~ :heart:
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huntercat111 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013
is jayfeather kinda mad?
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creanima Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
not really, he's just like "what? what's happening? ah.. i don't care." or something xD
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huntercat111 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013
nver mind XD
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birdqueen123 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
Amazing! Even better, this pic was posted on my birthday! XD
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SweetSilentSins Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Student Writer
OOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHH :P Well great drawing still
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SweetSilentSins Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Student Writer
I am just going to say what I like about them. Lionblaze: I love how his mussels are broad and he looks awesome, he deserves to be like that! Jayfeather: I like how you did his BLIND eyes, I saw some art that the people just put normal blue eyes! GOSH! And Hollyleaf: well all I got to say about her is that she is so cute! I love her bright green eyes and the small pink nose! Good job and keep up the hard work :D
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creanima Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you very much! :3
oh Jay's eyes are actually really blue with a black pupil. These grey eyes come from a desease that's called cataracts. But Jay was born blind, he doesn't have cataracts, so his eyes should look really normal. The only thing that's different with his eyes is that they gaze around randomly and don't watch any fixed points like other cats eyes or prey or whatever ^^
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Kila13 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
Helloo!! (are you German? ^^)
I LOVE STHIS PICURE!!
ITS WINDERFUL!!! the colours the pelt! the background!!
All is fantastic!! This is a request, do you request at the moment? *lovely gaze* (I hope thats right in englis XD
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creanima Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Danke x//3 Ich mach keine requests, sorry :/ Aber ich freu mich dass dir das Bildchen so gut gefällt^^
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Kila13 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
Und ich stotter mir da einen auf englisch ab,
während du Detsch kannst XD
Oh schade!
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lilymt Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Student
I absolutely ADORE the way you did Jayfeather's eyes! They're lovely.
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KevlinTheOsmosian Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Jayfeather's expression is like mine: I could care LESS no matter what you say. ~11
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Kesha-the-charage Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012
too darn cute :)
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Clockhound Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Student General Artist
I love Jayfeather's face XD
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thenorsewolf Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful! I love how each of their expressions conveys what the character's personality is like
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